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Estelle Redesign... Sorta

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Uggggh SO I'M TRYING TO SETTLE ON FINAL DESIGNS FOR ALL THE DUALITY CHARACTERS SINCE I'M FINALLY WRITING THE STORY DOWN N' SHIT

And Estelle's the least-drawn so I started with her... ~Digits999999220 recommended I make her hair red, and I liked it at first

But now I dunno OTL I CAN'T TELL IF HER COLOR SCHEME IS DECENT

HELP
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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

Allow me to open up with saying that I really like this. Your draftsmanship is very good with a lot of personality to it that keeps me interested.

Character Design: I'm wondering how the tail hooks up to her anatomically. Everything is very well tied in but I feel the tail could use more work. It's a very muscular and thick tail but it doesn't seem like it would attach too well to her frame. On the torso you may want to thin her out around the ribcage. It feels a little awkwardly thick at that area, not in the sense that she's got weight to her to support those large wings, but more to say that it feels too bulky and doesn't fit right. Also, her thighs feel like they need more weight to them. As far as costuming goes, I think you could add more in to really help push her personality better. Aside from that, the silhouette looks very nice an overall I like the design with the texture work.

Composition: The canvas needs more breathing room. She feels a tad cramped. Try locking her feet down too so that she feels like she is in a 3d space standing up. Her feet in perspective don't match up.

Overall: I really like this. Need I say more?